Rough Cuts

Below is our rough cut, which concludes all of the clips we have filmed however there is no music to it yet so i have added titles to show where this will occur, i have also done this when the clips are meant to be speeded up-



Audience Feedback-

•Intercutt the first clip to make time look as if it goes on.
•When the clips have been intercutt add different music to make the time seem as if it goes on even faster.
•Add a sound track for the car scene to draw in a wider audience.
•Add a clip at the begining to craete more juxpostion.
•Add a clip inbetween when the two females start arguing inside until they go outside.
•The car scene is very effective but the clips need to be shortened.
•Alter the voices so you can haer them more clearly.